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cries came again, a burst Jinsi a while. We are a family of three downstairs, is make a face to face with the old devil. old Satan insidious stared at me. However, I found that when I righteousness before him came from the old devil's eye is so insignificant, looked like a mouse hiding in the hole. and quacks like a trapped in the rat trap on the death throes. outer suburbs are quiet, the sky blue than in many urban areas. the wind as if it understood how I felt, when passing me quiet. Today is good weather! into the cemetery, along a path, to B,. our family, standing on his father's grave. hh I think, I can comfort the father of the deceased was! Meaningful action description personalized action, can create vivid images and sharp dynamic mm to William White. Towers Bolívar The first time I write, I seriously accept a friend about writing proposal, he stressed that the story action figures play an important role in the development. but in the calm of the scene, when characters are in conversation and listening, I have had trouble. I mistakenly believe that here as long as the use of some simple ; sit down I put Herve Leger fiction writing workshop to help me get rid of these problems.I know dry presentation and extraordinary action is no different, are enemies of the novel. I finally understand that when human activity and emotion, attitude, posture or facial expression when linked, they are the meaningful action, it is the personification of action, can create vivid images and clear so that the dynamic dialogue. I'll give you an example: in Shihuojinsi and Lieutenant card Struthers is a two police officers, they are the sergeant's office to discuss a murder case. Hawkins looked Carruthers, only the blue shoes are these? have this key, it is a bad key, what is the door, padlock on, or travel box on it? Hawkins put two things into his drawer. Carruthers stood up, should be on my table had. Do not worry, Hawkins, and we soon find out the truth. , go and leave without a description of intention, attitude, posture or facial expression. they do not express the emotions of two people. look at, when they dry the verb was changed to a lively activities, the scene on immediately became a vibrant. Hawkins leaned forward into the dumping. his fingers with a table of items: of? also the key to this to poor, whether it is the door, padlock on, or suitcase on? Struthers smile, stood up, patted the shoulder Hawkins.